The Comet: Chapter Two: The Night Sky

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Sleep was impossible.

Elias lay in bed with the blinds open, his eyes fixed on the stars. They glowed faintly, scattered across the blackness like distant cities, but he saw none of them. He was searching for fire. Searching for the silver blaze that had torn through the heavens hours earlier.

The comet.

His pulse quickened at the word, the way it settled on his tongue like a secret. He hadn’t whispered it aloud yet. It felt too sacred, too fragile. As if naming it would break the spell.

He rose before dawn, pulled on his coat, and returned to the street where he had first seen it. Ridiculous, he knew. The comet was long gone. But he couldn’t shake the thought that maybe, just maybe, he’d see it again.

The city was asleep. Frost glazed the sidewalks, turning every streetlight into a shard of gold. Elias tilted his head back, breath fogging the air.

Nothing.

Only the blank indifference of the night sky.

Still, something inside him had shifted. A door had opened. He walked to campus with his gaze fixed upward, ignoring the cold, ignoring the silence. He felt like a boy again, dizzy with a kind of awe he thought adulthood had buried.

By the time he arrived at the university, he was humming. He never hummed. His colleagues would have thought him feverish.

In his office, he drew the blinds wide and let the sun flood in. He powered up his computer, pulled up star charts, and began combing through orbital predictions. Nothing explained it. There had been no forecast, no mention of an unscheduled comet.

His rational mind scolded him: You imagined it. A trick of atmosphere. A misidentified meteor.

But his heart rebelled. No trick of the light could make him feel the way he had felt in that instant.

For the first time in years, Elias Thorne believed in something he couldn’t explain.

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That evening, restless and raw, he wandered into town. His footsteps carried him not to the sterile coffee shop he usually haunted, but to a small gallery tucked between two bookstores. He had passed it a hundred times and never gone in. The window was cluttered with canvases: sunsets bleeding into oceans, portraits sketched with quick, aching strokes, colors that seemed too alive to be still.

He almost kept walking. Almost.

But something tugged at him, the same invisible pull that had lifted his head skyward the night before.

Inside, the gallery smelled faintly of turpentine and cedar. Paintings lined the walls, some half-finished, others already signed. A single figure stood at the far end, brushing crimson onto a canvas.

She wore jeans streaked with paint, her hair loose, a pencil tucked behind her ear. Her car keys dangled from her back pocket, the metal keychain catching the light: a small silver star.

Elias lingered in the doorway, unsure whether to step forward or retreat. He wasn’t used to interrupting artists, or anyone outside his narrow world of science.

The woman glanced up. Her eyes were sharp, curious, but not unkind.

“You’re blocking the light,” she said.

Elias blinked. “What?”

She pointed with her brush. “The window. If you’re going to lurk, do it to the left. Shadows ruin the colors.”

Flustered, he stepped aside. “Sorry. I didn’t mean to intrude.”

“You didn’t.” She kept painting, bold strokes that seemed almost reckless but landed with precision. “You just look like a man who doesn’t know why he’s here.”

Elias swallowed. She wasn’t wrong.

“I… I saw something last night,” he said. The words surprised him, tumbling out before he could cage them.

She set down her brush, finally turning to face him. “Something?”

“A comet.” The word escaped like a confession. “It was extraordinary.”

For the first time, her expression softened. “A comet.” She smiled faintly, as if the universe had whispered a secret they both understood. “Funny. That’s what I call my car.”

He frowned. “Your car?”

She nodded toward the street outside, where a battered, rust-colored car sat beneath a flickering lamp post. On the hood, painted in bold white letters, was a single word: Comet.

Elias let out a breathless laugh. Not at her, not at the car—but at the impossible symmetry of it all.

The woman extended a paint-stained hand. “Claire.”

He hesitated, then shook it. Her fingers were warm, flecked with color.

“Elias,” he said.

“Elias,” she repeated, as though testing the weight of the name. “So, professor of comets—”

“I’m not a professor of comets.”

“Fine. Professor of stars, then. What brings you to an art gallery?”

He glanced around at the walls, at the canvases burning with life. “I don’t know,” he admitted. “Maybe I was looking for… something I couldn’t measure.”

Her smile widened. “Well. Then you’re in the right place.”

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That night, Elias walked home differently. The comet still haunted him, yes. But now it had a reflection on earth: a woman with paint on her jeans and fire in her eyes, who named her car after the very thing that had changed his life.

For the first time in years, the silence inside him cracked, and light slipped through.